Simply put: Show, don’t tell
Despite what you
think of when you think of description in stories, you should not tell a reader what he or she should see or
think. Yes, don’t tell us, show us!
Imagery (your best friend)
Instead of just
using the old standby (adjectives), try describing places, people, things and
ideas using your senses (there are five
of them). Don’t just rely on visual description.
Emotion
Sometimes our
emotions can describe a place or a person.
Adjectives that Describe
It is useful to use
adjectives here and there, but use them sparingly.
Nouns that Describe
It is useful to use
nouns to describe places for setting, etc.
Verbs that Describe
Another useful word
is the verb. Sometimes actions are worth a thousand words.
Figurative language
In addition to the
elementary school standbys, simile, metaphor, metonymy, analogies, and other
uses of figurative language describe just as well.
What is isn’t
Sometimes it’s
useful to describe something by not describing it. Try it.
That’s so cliché!
Avoid clichés like
the plague.
Don’t overdo description
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